Bus Stop Writing

Purpose: Describe the characters 

 There was a girl walking to the bus stop to go back home from school. But then she stopped. Her mouth opens wide and says. “ OMG A BUS STOP MADE OUT OF A BUS!”

She sits inside the bus stop and thinks I wounded if they are doing this to all the bus stops.

She sees the bus coming to pick her up. The bus stops right in front of her. Herrrrr! the doors open it is appositely dead no one else was on the bus. She asks the bus driver. “ Are the other bus stops are like that?” He answers. “ No. sorry kid.”

When she arrived home she says to here mum. “ Can we not move I want to stay here because there is this really cool bus stop.” 

The End

 This is an unedited pice of writing.

2 Stars And A Wish

Today we have made 2 stars and a wish. The 2 stars are the ones you have improved on, and the wish means what your goal is. Here is a picture of my 2 stars and a wish.

Whoops Didn't Print!

On Monday, we watched a really funny movie about 2 people who get stuck on an escalator. Have you seen it?

Criteria: (Content)

• Video - 30 seconds long, time is limited. 
• Scenario - Show someone being stuck and not using the ability to act. 
• Clear Message - Short sharp clip. Can the watcher get the point of your video?
• Unique - Coming up with something funny that gets a laugh from others. 
• Time Passing - Do you need to show time passing in your clip to emphasise your message. 

Criteria: (Movie)

• Light - Make sure the sun isn’t creating a hard to see clip. 
• Voice Volume - Needs to be louder than other background volume eg Noise, Kids.
• Frame - What’s in the frame to make your message obvious. 
• Steady Hands - Make sure the camera is still. 
• Individual Clips - Don’t do one continuous shot of 30 seconds. Make a range of short clips and join together. 

Feedback And Feedfoward:
I think it is really cool of how you and your group made the lighting really good. What I think you could work on is maybe make the message more clearer because we can't really see Sophie clicking cancel instead of print.
Aye :-P

Swimming Smart Goals

Description:
We have been having swimming lessons to help us get ready for the big swimming day, where we race to come 1st 2nd and 3rd for your team. My team Is Kiwi. I am good at remembering my togs on swimming days. Our swimming days are Wensday, Thursday and Friday. 

My Goals:
For freestyle my goal is to leave my head down looking at the ground. To achieve this goal I need to remember to look down. 

For backstroke my goal is to keep my body straight like a arrow. To achieve this goal I need to remember to not have wiggly hips.

At the swimming sports day my goal is to come 1st 2nd or 3rd because last year I came 4th. So this year I want to get better at what I did last year. 

Evaluation: 
I have looked at both of the movies and I recon I have gone faster. I have  achieved my goals and I am really happy with myself. Also I am glad because when I did breaststroke I came first and that was the first I did breaststroke at swimming sports so I am feeling really proud.

        

Maths Test!

Description:

 We have done a maths test to figure out what stage we are up to. So theres stage 4 5 6 and 7 there is only one person on stage 7 but there will be more, I am on stage 5. The pink high litter mean think so thats your goal. Also the yellow high litter mean gold so that is that u have worked it out in 3 seconds. If the title of the different parts are high littered pink and its got yellow, it means that that was a bit tricky. We have to work it out in 3 seconds to get them correct.     

Goal: 

My goal for stage 5 is complete the pattern. I am going to achieve this goal by doing lots and lots of practice till I get them in 3 seconds. So I will be able to make it to my next goal. I hope I get it done at the end of this month for this goal I am working on. 

Memories At Russell Street School

Purpose: To share memories from my childhood.

In class we were making a poem about our memories at Russell Street School. Hope you enjoy all the memories about I at Russell Street School. 

Remember the time wanting to be on road patrol, and making new friends? It  was so cool!

Remember in Sonita's  class looking up to Zoe my buddy, also touching the BOILING HOT glue gun? MAN THAT HURT!

Remember tagging people in flags? it was ridiculously awesome! Also did you remember at break time there was a girls side and a boys side? It was super funny!

Remember the first year of Poutama? It was so cool all the people, and everything we did! 

- That was me growing up.